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Post by Clareesa on Thu Aug 28, 2008 11:39 pm

Here's a song I wrote.
I'm not much of a song writer...though I do love writing them! Smile
Please tell me what you think and any suggestions you may have on how to make it better. Very Happy


In This World
By Clareesa J.


This is what I feel
When I am lost
All alone
Surround by darkness

In a world of darkness
In a world of hope
Hope that I canít see

When will I see,
in this world of pain,
in this world of lose.
Is there any hope?

I feel inside,
There is something more,
I am searching for it,
Searching for you

Do you feel the pain?
Do you feel the hurt?
Do you see this world?
Of darkness and pain?

Then I see,
See so clearly now

In this world of darkness,
In this world of lose,
There is a faceÖ
Someone there


Someone there always
There for me

This is what I feel
When Iím loved
By a friend
By a father

In a world of love
In a world of comfort
I feel joy
Cause now I can see

See you, in front of me
Always, always there.
I know I am loved
By a God high above

In a world of love
I am loved
not alone
But with you

Always, always, always You.

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Post by Guest on Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:05 am

SOUNDS GREAT!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Fri Aug 29, 2008 1:08 pm

Wow! It is long! I like it! Razz
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Post by Clareesa on Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:44 pm

thanks! Very Happy (And I always write long songs...REALLY long...this was my shortest one! lol)

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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:53 pm

Well I still like it!
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Post by RachaelB on Fri Aug 29, 2008 6:10 pm

AHH!! I LOVE IT!!
Great job!
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Post by Guest on Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:31 pm

i have seen a lot longer songs befor, looks great
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Post by Abigail G. on Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:21 pm

Sounds good, Clareesa! Did you write music for it, too?

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Post by Clareesa on Tue Sep 09, 2008 5:36 pm

Umm...not yet, but I'm probably gonna! Very Happy

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