In This World
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In This World
Here's a song I wrote.
I'm not much of a song writer...though I do love writing them!
Please tell me what you think and any suggestions you may have on how to make it better.
In This World
By Clareesa J.
This is what I feel
When I am lost
All alone
Surround by darkness
In a world of darkness
In a world of hope
Hope that I can’t see
When will I see,
in this world of pain,
in this world of lose.
Is there any hope?
I feel inside,
There is something more,
I am searching for it,
Searching for you
Do you feel the pain?
Do you feel the hurt?
Do you see this world?
Of darkness and pain?
Then I see,
See so clearly now
In this world of darkness,
In this world of lose,
There is a face…
Someone there
Someone there always
There for me
This is what I feel
When I’m loved
By a friend
By a father
In a world of love
In a world of comfort
I feel joy
Cause now I can see
See you, in front of me
Always, always there.
I know I am loved
By a God high above
In a world of love
I am loved
not alone
But with you
Always, always, always You.
I'm not much of a song writer...though I do love writing them!
Please tell me what you think and any suggestions you may have on how to make it better.
In This World
By Clareesa J.
This is what I feel
When I am lost
All alone
Surround by darkness
In a world of darkness
In a world of hope
Hope that I can’t see
When will I see,
in this world of pain,
in this world of lose.
Is there any hope?
I feel inside,
There is something more,
I am searching for it,
Searching for you
Do you feel the pain?
Do you feel the hurt?
Do you see this world?
Of darkness and pain?
Then I see,
See so clearly now
In this world of darkness,
In this world of lose,
There is a face…
Someone there
Someone there always
There for me
This is what I feel
When I’m loved
By a friend
By a father
In a world of love
In a world of comfort
I feel joy
Cause now I can see
See you, in front of me
Always, always there.
I know I am loved
By a God high above
In a world of love
I am loved
not alone
But with you
Always, always, always You.
Clareesa- Admin
- Number of posts : 961
Age : 30
Location : Wherever God puts me
Hobbies : Doing what God wants me to
Humor :
Nickname : Fred, Clari, Catch-light Clari, Reeces-Pieces, Kee-kee, Pretty Much Everything Else, Creesa, Punk(don't ask),
Status: :
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Psalm 62:5, 'Find rest, O my soul, in God alone; my hope comes from him.'
Registration date : 2008-06-16
Re: In This World
Wow! It is long! I like it!
Crystal Rose C.- Number of posts : 569
Age : 29
Location : Right where God put me! On earth! Can you say that? "E-A-R-T-H"
Hobbies : singing! thats like all I do all day! Oh and I ride my bike....oh and I sing too! HAHA!
Humor : Why did the chicken jump on a BQ? ....He wanted fried chicken!
Nickname : "Hey you!"
"Tom Boy!"
"Coco-lakie"
Status: : Filling out my status on teens4god! DUH! HAHA!
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Prob 31
The whole thing!
Registration date : 2008-07-02
Re: In This World
thanks! (And I always write long songs...REALLY long...this was my shortest one! lol)
Clareesa- Admin
- Number of posts : 961
Age : 30
Location : Wherever God puts me
Hobbies : Doing what God wants me to
Humor :
Nickname : Fred, Clari, Catch-light Clari, Reeces-Pieces, Kee-kee, Pretty Much Everything Else, Creesa, Punk(don't ask),
Status: :
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Psalm 62:5, 'Find rest, O my soul, in God alone; my hope comes from him.'
Registration date : 2008-06-16
Re: In This World
Well I still like it!
Crystal Rose C.- Number of posts : 569
Age : 29
Location : Right where God put me! On earth! Can you say that? "E-A-R-T-H"
Hobbies : singing! thats like all I do all day! Oh and I ride my bike....oh and I sing too! HAHA!
Humor : Why did the chicken jump on a BQ? ....He wanted fried chicken!
Nickname : "Hey you!"
"Tom Boy!"
"Coco-lakie"
Status: : Filling out my status on teens4god! DUH! HAHA!
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Prob 31
The whole thing!
Registration date : 2008-07-02
Re: In This World
Sounds good, Clareesa! Did you write music for it, too?
Abigail G.- Number of posts : 468
Age : 31
Location : In the land of weird.
Hobbies : E-mail, songwriting, guitar, making cards
Humor : Small sign I saw posted on a street light pole: 'MEET LOCAL SINGLES!!! Easy: stand near others, turn off your cell phone.'
Nickname : Abigaily, Person, Abicus
Status: : I hate bugs.
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Psalm 52:9 "I will thank you forever, for you have done it. I will wait for your name, for it is good, in the presence of the godly."
Registration date : 2008-07-10
Re: In This World
Umm...not yet, but I'm probably gonna!
Clareesa- Admin
- Number of posts : 961
Age : 30
Location : Wherever God puts me
Hobbies : Doing what God wants me to
Humor :
Nickname : Fred, Clari, Catch-light Clari, Reeces-Pieces, Kee-kee, Pretty Much Everything Else, Creesa, Punk(don't ask),
Status: :
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Psalm 62:5, 'Find rest, O my soul, in God alone; my hope comes from him.'
Registration date : 2008-06-16
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