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I Saw Him Die
by Clareesa Tue May 05, 2009 9:11 pm
Here's a song I wrote..based on an apologetics card I did. 
Tell me what you think! And I'm totally open to ideas to make it better!
....I know it's kinda long...long songs are my specialty! lol
I Saw Him Die
I heard the sound of drums
beating our their cry
the sound of one
to die
A crowd of peole came
Came to see me die
I saw the the judge
The man who had said die
His face was filed with sadness
And no anger did I hold
I deserved to die
A blindfold around my eyes
I
Was going to die
Wait!
I heard the cry
They uncovered my eyes
and I turned to see the man
Wait! He said
I will take his debt
I
will die
A rope around his neck
He turned to me and said
You have a life ahead of you
So live it to the fullest
I shut my eyes
and opened them
It was over
The judge had paid my debt
I
Saw him die
Then I heard the story
Of a man
Of a world
Full of sin
They all deserved to die
Death eternally
But there was that man
Who gave it up for them
He said
I
will die
He was nailed to a cross
A crown of thorns he wore
The people scoffed at him
and cried Blasphemer!
It is finished. Came the cry.
He had died for them
He paid the price
For their sin
I saw Him die
Tell me what you think! And I'm totally open to ideas to make it better!
....I know it's kinda long...long songs are my specialty!
lolI Saw Him Die
I heard the sound of drums
beating our their cry
the sound of one
to die
A crowd of peole came
Came to see me die
I saw the the judge
The man who had said die
His face was filed with sadness
And no anger did I hold
I deserved to die
A blindfold around my eyes
I
Was going to die
Wait!
I heard the cry
They uncovered my eyes
and I turned to see the man
Wait! He said
I will take his debt
I
will die
A rope around his neck
He turned to me and said
You have a life ahead of you
So live it to the fullest
I shut my eyes
and opened them
It was over
The judge had paid my debt
I
Saw him die
Then I heard the story
Of a man
Of a world
Full of sin
They all deserved to die
Death eternally
But there was that man
Who gave it up for them
He said
I
will die
He was nailed to a cross
A crown of thorns he wore
The people scoffed at him
and cried Blasphemer!
It is finished. Came the cry.
He had died for them
He paid the price
For their sin
I saw Him die
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Re: I Saw Him Die
by Sonia J. Wed May 06, 2009 2:37 pm
I heard your apologetics card on that! It's really good!(both the song and the story)
thanks Clareesa!
thanks Clareesa!
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Re: I Saw Him Die
by Foster G Wed May 06, 2009 3:32 pm
you can get a good card with that under six minuites?lol
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Re: I Saw Him Die
by Clareesa Wed May 06, 2009 3:50 pm
Foster G. wrote:you can get a good card with that under six minuites?lol
haha. lol it was just my AG.
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Re: I Saw Him Die
by Foster G Thu May 07, 2009 10:39 am
well, I thought it might have taken up a lot of time, but I see that it's not much longer than usual
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Nickname : I don't need one, foster's different enough
Status: : still checking this site, but not posting much..lol
(sorry, I am still here...haha)
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Joshua 1:9 "Have I not commanded you? Be strong and of good courage; do not be afraid, nor be dismayed, for the LORD your God is with you wherever you go"
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Re: I Saw Him Die
by Clareesa Thu May 07, 2009 11:02 am
Nope...well my speech WAS over 6 minutes...but not by that much. And mg AG was a little longer than usual..
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The whole thing!
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Re: I Saw Him Die
by Guest Sat May 09, 2009 1:48 am
Really great song, Clareesa! So is it set to music?
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Re: I Saw Him Die
by Clareesa Sat May 09, 2009 2:10 am
Megan Langham wrote:Really great song, Clareesa! So is it set to music?
Yeah,!...though i don't have it written out. When I write songs (usually) first I come up with the music on my guitar...then I write the song!
....when I get the chance I'm gonna write out the music...it's really simple all Am's E's and F's!
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Re: I Saw Him Die
by Abigail G. Wed May 13, 2009 4:44 pm
Wow, Clareesa, that was moving...I want to hear your apologetics speech on that!
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