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Post by Clareesa Wed Jul 09, 2008 8:48 pm

This is a poem I wrote about a year (maybe two) ago. I don't usually like to write poems, but I thought of this one in my head and decided to write it out. Tell me what you thnk. Very Happy





Like a whisper through the wind,
Like a piercing through the night,
A sound came from the darkness,
To anyone who heard, it gave fright.

It slunk along the shadows,
It went through open windows,
Attacking its unaware victim,
Their screams heard across the town.

An open window,
Inside a young boy,
Sleeping soundly,
His heart filled with joy.

Knowing in his heart,
A joy greater than darkness,
A guardian to protect him,
To keep him from all evil.

From the open window came the darkness,
It’s evil laugh echoing through the air,
It saw the sleeping boy,
And harm him he not dare.

For even the darkness knew,
There was a greater power,
One that could destroy even him,
Even that very hour.

The darkness slunk away,
Fearing the greater one,
The one who protects,
The one who is the only one.

Now all who trust in the One,
Fear the darkness no more,
For the greater One,
Is in their hearts forever more.

For God is the One,
the only One,
who came from heaven to earth,
to die for all we have done.

Because he loves you
and always will.


Last edited by Clareesa J. on Thu Jul 10, 2008 2:40 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Post by Anna P Thu Jul 10, 2008 1:00 pm

I like your peom alot.
Thanks for sharing it with us, I think you did an awesome job.
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Post by Crystal Rose C. Thu Jul 10, 2008 4:52 pm

I like it to! I'm not that great of a wrighter. But I love reading others poems, songs and storys!
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Post by @ubrey B. Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:14 pm

I read this before at your house...i think, but i remember liking it alot.
And wishing i could write like that. alien
Writing is somthing i do NOT do.
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Post by Amy I. Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:07 pm

You most certainly DO write!
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Post by Guest Wed Jul 16, 2008 5:09 pm

its got a great message
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Post by Mason R. Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:29 pm

very cool!
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Post by Guest Fri Jul 25, 2008 5:14 pm

love it! Exclamation
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Post by Guest Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:17 pm

Great Jobe!!!SmileyCentral.com
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Post by Guest Sun Jul 27, 2008 2:23 am

HoooRa!

i'm bad at poetry because i always think of the dumbests thingss to ryme with....
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Post by RachaelB Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:30 pm

HEY!
Thats AWESOME!! You did a really coolioz job!
Maybe you should think about writing more. =D

Well ttyl8er
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Post by Clareesa Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:00 pm

thanx! Smile But really, I don't write poems a lot...mostly books....
just once inawhile I come up with an idea in my head! Very Happy
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Post by RachaelB Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:10 pm

Yah. Well thats okay. The acational ones sometimes tend to be better.

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Post by Clareesa Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:31 pm

yup! Laughing
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Post by Sonia J. Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:29 pm

wow Clareesa! thats really good! Very Happy
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Post by Whitney B. Tue Mar 02, 2010 11:30 pm

Misa likeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Razz
*sniff* That...*sniff*...was so...*gasp*....BEAUTIFUL!!!! Sad Sad Smile Sad Sad
lol!
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Post by Clareesa Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:10 pm

Thanks Whitney Smile
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