The Greater One
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The Greater One
This is a poem I wrote about a year (maybe two) ago. I don't usually like to write poems, but I thought of this one in my head and decided to write it out. Tell me what you thnk.
Like a whisper through the wind,
Like a piercing through the night,
A sound came from the darkness,
To anyone who heard, it gave fright.
It slunk along the shadows,
It went through open windows,
Attacking its unaware victim,
Their screams heard across the town.
An open window,
Inside a young boy,
Sleeping soundly,
His heart filled with joy.
Knowing in his heart,
A joy greater than darkness,
A guardian to protect him,
To keep him from all evil.
From the open window came the darkness,
It’s evil laugh echoing through the air,
It saw the sleeping boy,
And harm him he not dare.
For even the darkness knew,
There was a greater power,
One that could destroy even him,
Even that very hour.
The darkness slunk away,
Fearing the greater one,
The one who protects,
The one who is the only one.
Now all who trust in the One,
Fear the darkness no more,
For the greater One,
Is in their hearts forever more.
For God is the One,
the only One,
who came from heaven to earth,
to die for all we have done.
Because he loves you
and always will.
Like a whisper through the wind,
Like a piercing through the night,
A sound came from the darkness,
To anyone who heard, it gave fright.
It slunk along the shadows,
It went through open windows,
Attacking its unaware victim,
Their screams heard across the town.
An open window,
Inside a young boy,
Sleeping soundly,
His heart filled with joy.
Knowing in his heart,
A joy greater than darkness,
A guardian to protect him,
To keep him from all evil.
From the open window came the darkness,
It’s evil laugh echoing through the air,
It saw the sleeping boy,
And harm him he not dare.
For even the darkness knew,
There was a greater power,
One that could destroy even him,
Even that very hour.
The darkness slunk away,
Fearing the greater one,
The one who protects,
The one who is the only one.
Now all who trust in the One,
Fear the darkness no more,
For the greater One,
Is in their hearts forever more.
For God is the One,
the only One,
who came from heaven to earth,
to die for all we have done.
Because he loves you
and always will.
Last edited by Clareesa J. on Thu Jul 10, 2008 2:40 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: The Greater One
I like your peom alot.
Thanks for sharing it with us, I think you did an awesome job.
Thanks for sharing it with us, I think you did an awesome job.
Anna P- Number of posts : 160
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I like it to! I'm not that great of a wrighter. But I love reading others poems, songs and storys!
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The whole thing!
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I read this before at your house...i think, but i remember liking it alot.
And wishing i could write like that.
Writing is somthing i do NOT do.
And wishing i could write like that.
Writing is somthing i do NOT do.
Re: The Greater One
You most certainly DO write!
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HoooRa!
i'm bad at poetry because i always think of the dumbests thingss to ryme with....
i'm bad at poetry because i always think of the dumbests thingss to ryme with....
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HEY!
Thats AWESOME!! You did a really coolioz job!
Maybe you should think about writing more. =D
Well ttyl8er
Rachael B
Thats AWESOME!! You did a really coolioz job!
Maybe you should think about writing more. =D
Well ttyl8er
Rachael B
Re: The Greater One
thanx! But really, I don't write poems a lot...mostly books....
just once inawhile I come up with an idea in my head!
just once inawhile I come up with an idea in my head!
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Clareesa- Admin
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Nickname : Fred, Clari, Catch-light Clari, Reeces-Pieces, Kee-kee, Pretty Much Everything Else, Creesa, Punk(don't ask),
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wow Clareesa! thats really good!
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Misa likeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
*sniff* That...*sniff*...was so...*gasp*....BEAUTIFUL!!!!
*sniff* That...*sniff*...was so...*gasp*....BEAUTIFUL!!!!
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Thanks Whitney
Clareesa- Admin
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Favorite Scripture Verse? : Psalm 62:5, 'Find rest, O my soul, in God alone; my hope comes from him.'
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