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Why? By Rachael B

Post by RachaelB on Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:46 pm

hello!

I wrote a song about a week ago and kept on forgetting to post it. lol
I just thought about it so I thought I would go ahead and post a sample of it.
Tell me what you think.

Just so you know this song had nothing to do with things that are going on in my life.
I wrote as a theme song for a book I am writtting. k!


Verse one
A tragedy has fallen upon me
My hearts broken
And I can't breathe
I don't know how to take it
So God please take it away

Pre-chorus
It happened like a flash before my eyes
I didn't know what to think
All I could do was cry
God please tell me

Chorus
Why did this have to happen to me
Why couldn't you give me some kinda of waring
Why did this have to happen to me
Why couldn't I see it coming
God please tell me
Why couldn't I see it coming


And thats it!

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Post by Clareesa on Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:53 pm

Coolio! I like it!! Very Happy Great job!

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Post by Amy I. on Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:08 pm

Me too! And by the way, if you want to post your book, I'd love to read it!
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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Sat Aug 23, 2008 11:08 am

I like it! I think it is rilly good! And what is your book about? I'm a book worm alright! study
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Post by RachaelB on Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:29 pm

My book is about a girl and her journey and such.
Maybe I'll post the first two chapters when I finnish the 2nd chapter. k!

But thanx. =D
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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Sat Aug 23, 2008 10:00 pm

Ok that would be great! I would live to read it!
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Post by Clareesa on Sat Aug 23, 2008 10:02 pm

me 2! bounce

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Post by RachaelB on Sat Aug 23, 2008 10:04 pm

LOL You are so funny! Okay I'll post it on Monday...if I remember. k! =D
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Post by Whitney B. on Fri May 22, 2009 2:52 pm

That's...wow. That was really good. Post your book OK?
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