What do I do?

Go down

What do I do?

Post by Anna G. on Tue May 26, 2009 8:56 pm

Here's a song I wrote. Tell me what you think.

I was the nails that held Him there,
the weight upon His sholders.
The culprit that broke His heart,
And the heart His eyes peirced,

When He said:

"Father, forgive them, for they know not what they do.
Father, forgive them, though they hurt me and you.
Father, forgive them, for they know not what they do.

What they do.
What they do.
What they do.

I looked down, ashamed.
Jesus, I tainted Your name.
Father, I hindered Your fame.

So now, LORD, I ask Thee,
Father, please teach me.

What I really do
When I run from You.
And Your not who I pursue.
What do I do.

So show me Your broken heart,
And let me be broken.
LORD, when you smile, let me see,
The value of that token!

What do I do? Smile
avatar
Anna G.

Female Number of posts : 46
Age : 23
Location : here
Hobbies : Computer, playing with my bird, emailing, school
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Isaiah 43:1-4a
Registration date : 2009-02-08

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: What do I do?

Post by Sonia J. on Tue May 26, 2009 9:24 pm

wow! great job Anna! Very Happy I didn't know that you wrote songs! Cool
avatar
Sonia J.

Female Number of posts : 705
Age : 22
Location : Washington
Hobbies : Public speaking, archery, hanging out w/ friends, cooking, sleeptalking(lol), reading, Acting, and tons more!
Humor : Ahh! There's an ant on the floor! Everybody RUN!!!...Wait a sec, I'm not afraid of those. Never mind.
Nickname : Sony, Sonia Bear, others that I don't care to mention....
Status: : Living life as it comes...
Favorite Scripture Verse? : At the moment Philippians 2:3 Smile
Registration date : 2008-07-29

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: What do I do?

Post by Abigail G. on Tue May 26, 2009 11:36 pm

Yeah, Anna, very nice! (But I know you try writing songs sometimes...lol)

_________________

I've seen dreams that move the mountains, hope that doesn't ever end, even when the sky is falling, I've seen miracles just happen, silent prayers get answered, broken hearts become brand new, that's what faith can do.
avatar
Abigail G.

Female Number of posts : 468
Age : 25
Location : In the land of weird.
Hobbies : E-mail, songwriting, guitar, making cards
Humor : Small sign I saw posted on a street light pole: 'MEET LOCAL SINGLES!!! Easy: stand near others, turn off your cell phone.'
Nickname : Abigaily, Person, Abicus
Status: : I hate bugs.
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Psalm 52:9 "I will thank you forever, for you have done it. I will wait for your name, for it is good, in the presence of the godly."
Registration date : 2008-07-10

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: What do I do?

Post by Clareesa on Wed May 27, 2009 1:22 am

Good job! It's a really cool song and looks like it could be
Very powerful!

_________________
A song in the heart puts a smile on the face.
avatar
Clareesa
Admin

Female Number of posts : 961
Age : 24
Location : Wherever God puts me
Hobbies : Doing what God wants me to
Humor :
Nickname : Fred, Clari, Catch-light Clari, Reeces-Pieces, Kee-kee, Pretty Much Everything Else, Creesa, Punk(don't ask),
Status: :
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Psalm 62:5, 'Find rest, O my soul, in God alone; my hope comes from him.'
Registration date : 2008-06-16

View user profile http://wix.com/clarinoel/clarinoel

Back to top Go down

Re: What do I do?

Post by @ubrey B. on Wed Jun 03, 2009 4:11 pm

LOOKS LIKE? Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

AWESOMENESS!!! FriendHug

_________________

"And Aubrey was her name/ a not so very ordinary girl or name/ but who's to blame?" -Bread
avatar
@ubrey B.
Admin

Female Number of posts : 478
Age : 24
Location : Where a battle never occured.
Hobbies : whatever hits me momentarity :)
Humor : I love poetry, long walks on the beach, and poking dead things with a stick :)
Nickname : Pooky
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Isaiah 6:8
Registration date : 2008-06-17

View user profile http://www.teens4god.sosblog.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: What do I do?

Post by Crystal Rose C. on Wed Jun 03, 2009 10:01 pm

iagree Yeah I agree with the posts above! And I love the way it flows! When I say it out loud it sounds very beautiful!
avatar
Crystal Rose C.

Female Number of posts : 569
Age : 23
Location : Right where God put me! On earth! Can you say that? "E-A-R-T-H"
Hobbies : singing! thats like all I do all day! Oh and I ride my bike....oh and I sing too! HAHA!
Humor : Why did the chicken jump on a BQ? ....He wanted fried chicken!
Nickname : "Hey you!"
"Tom Boy!"
"Coco-lakie"



Status: : Filling out my status on teens4god! DUH! HAHA!
Favorite Scripture Verse? : Prob 31

The whole thing!
Registration date : 2008-07-02

View user profile http://areyougoodingodseyes.blogspot.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: What do I do?

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top


 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum