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Post by Guest on Thu May 07, 2009 3:09 pm

The land of shadow and night
by caleb search

By mountains gray and oceans green
There lived a man with a noble heart
Morning the loss of his maiden fair
By the evil monster Rimgress
In the land of shadow and night

By mountains gray and beaches smooth
The man with the noble heart left
For to save his maiden fair
And to kill the monster Rimgress
In the land of shadow and night

By mountains gray and fields of tan
The man with the noble heart walks
Fighting minions of the evil monster Rimgress
In the land of shadow and night

By mountains gray and lakes of blue
The man with the noble heart runs
Slaying the illusions of water
Created by the evil monster Rimgress
In the land of shadow and night

By mountains gray and rivers brown
The man with the noble heart wades
Through the thick trapping mud
Laid down by the evil monster Rimgress
In the land of shadow and night

By mountains gray and plains of black
The man with the noble heart stops
To swing his blade in battle
And to kill the evil monster Rimgress
In the land of shadow and night

In mountains gray and caves of dark
The man with the noble heart saves
His maiden fair from her cage and chains
For the evil monster Rimgress is no more
In the land of shadow and night
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Post by Clareesa on Thu May 07, 2009 3:37 pm

Great job! I like it a lot! ...sounds like it could be made into a novel! Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Thu May 07, 2009 3:42 pm

only if you read it literaly
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Post by Sonia J. on Thu May 07, 2009 7:43 pm

great job!! Very Happy
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Post by Guest on Wed May 13, 2009 6:20 pm

Awesome!
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Post by Guest on Fri May 15, 2009 1:07 pm

its kind of interesting where I got the inspiration from I was actually reading the bible and it mentioned Satan and I thought about how he deceives us with his minions and ilutions and lies and this poem just started writing itself in my head I literally had to wright it down on a scrap piece of paper it was coming so fast
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Post by Guest on Fri May 15, 2009 1:11 pm

and you'll never guess where the monsters name came from
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Post by Clareesa on Fri May 15, 2009 1:13 pm

I think it's awesome to get an idea like that! ....and it's really cool to know the 'story' behind a poem. I've been looking into a lot of poems, songs, ect...and finding the inspiration for them...and sometimes it's really shocking.
But it's really cool...

anyways....that's awesome Caleb! Very Happy

And where did the monsters come from???? now you got me wondering...

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Post by Kaylee B on Fri May 15, 2009 2:09 pm

Wow... that is awesome!
I love it!

Yes, now you've got me curious... where did you get the name "Rimgress"?
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Post by Sonia J. on Fri May 15, 2009 3:39 pm

Kaylee B wrote:Wow... that is awesome!
I love it!

Yes, now you've got me curious... where did you get the name "Rimgress"?


same here! scratch Very Happy
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Post by Guest on Sun May 17, 2009 1:08 am

OH I have you curious do I? well I was sitting on my bed thinking about what to name the bad guy in my poem when I glanced at the pilgrims progress book I had been reading, but was half covered by some guitar songs I had been learning, all I could read was ...rims ...gres and that's where I got the name.
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Post by Clareesa on Sun May 17, 2009 10:49 am

Creative. Very Happy
But who are the monsters supposed to be.

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Post by Kaylee B on Sun May 17, 2009 2:49 pm

caleb s wrote: OH I have you curious do I? well I was sitting on my bed thinking about what to name the bad guy in my poem when I glanced at the pilgrims progress book I had been reading, but was half covered by some guitar songs I had been learning, all I could read was ...rims ...gres and that's where I got the name.

Creative idea! I never would've guessed... Very Happy
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Post by Guest on Sun May 17, 2009 9:41 pm

Clareesa J. wrote:Creative. Very Happy
But who are the monsters supposed to be.

symbols for evil loosely based on Satan and demons
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Post by Clareesa on Sun May 17, 2009 11:08 pm

hmm...cool! That's take a lot of creativity!

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Post by Foster G on Mon May 18, 2009 10:36 am

well, what else would they represent?lol
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Post by Sonia J. on Mon May 18, 2009 11:08 am

that IS really Creative! Cool
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Post by Clareesa on Mon May 18, 2009 1:11 pm

Foster G. wrote:well, what else would they represent?lol

I don''t know...It could be anything...lol I just wanted to find out for sure...


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Post by Guest on Mon May 18, 2009 1:23 pm

well it kind of does represent my anger, I was writing this when I was really MAD and I wanted to make something to express how I felt that's why I was also reading the bible, trying to cool off
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Post by Foster G on Mon May 18, 2009 6:14 pm

well, obsessive anger can be seen as a demon...lol
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