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I Saw Him Die

Post by Clareesa on Tue May 05, 2009 9:11 pm

Here's a song I wrote..based on an apologetics card I did. Very Happy
Tell me what you think! And I'm totally open to ideas to make it better!
....I know it's kinda long...long songs are my specialty! Very Happy lol



I Saw Him Die

I heard the sound of drums
beating our their cry
the sound of one
to die

A crowd of peole came
Came to see me die
I saw the the judge
The man who had said die

His face was filed with sadness
And no anger did I hold
I deserved to die
A blindfold around my eyes

I
Was going to die

Wait!
I heard the cry
They uncovered my eyes
and I turned to see the man

Wait! He said
I will take his debt
I
will die

A rope around his neck
He turned to me and said
You have a life ahead of you
So live it to the fullest

I shut my eyes
and opened them
It was over
The judge had paid my debt

I
Saw him die

Then I heard the story
Of a man
Of a world
Full of sin

They all deserved to die
Death eternally
But there was that man
Who gave it up for them

He said
I
will die

He was nailed to a cross
A crown of thorns he wore
The people scoffed at him
and cried Blasphemer!

It is finished. Came the cry.
He had died for them
He paid the price
For their sin

I saw Him die

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Post by Sonia J. on Wed May 06, 2009 2:37 pm

I heard your apologetics card on that! It's really good!(both the song and the story)
thanks Clareesa! Very Happy
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Post by Guest on Wed May 06, 2009 3:02 pm

Cool!
Thanks for sharing
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Post by Foster G on Wed May 06, 2009 3:32 pm

you can get a good card with that under six minuites?lol
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Post by Clareesa on Wed May 06, 2009 3:50 pm

Foster G. wrote:you can get a good card with that under six minuites?lol

haha. lol it was just my AG. Very Happy

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Post by Foster G on Thu May 07, 2009 10:39 am

well, I thought it might have taken up a lot of time, but I see that it's not much longer than usual Smile
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Post by Clareesa on Thu May 07, 2009 11:02 am

Nope...well my speech WAS over 6 minutes...but not by that much. And mg AG was a little longer than usual..

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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Thu May 07, 2009 1:56 pm

I really like that song!
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Post by Guest on Sat May 09, 2009 1:48 am

Really great song, Clareesa! So is it set to music?
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Post by Clareesa on Sat May 09, 2009 2:10 am

Megan Langham wrote:Really great song, Clareesa! So is it set to music?

Yeah,!...though i don't have it written out. When I write songs (usually) first I come up with the music on my guitar...then I write the song! Very Happy ....when I get the chance I'm gonna write out the music...it's really simple all Am's E's and F's! Very Happy

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Re: I Saw Him Die

Post by Abigail G. on Wed May 13, 2009 4:44 pm

Wow, Clareesa, that was moving...I want to hear your apologetics speech on that! Very Happy

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