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Post by Guest on Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:54 am

Here's the last song I wrote...I'd appreciate any comments/criticisms! The lead singer of our band just set it to music and I have no idea what he did...it's kinda funny. Smile I'll find out on Saturday, I think.

He grips a gleaming sword
Vengeance glinting in his eye
His anger will destroy the ones
Who cruelly sought to take my life

He firmly clasps my hand
He whispers to my soul
Words of love reminding me
He’ll never let me go

Because his hands are holding me
Strong and merciful, they are...

Chorus

The hands of a warrior, the hands of a king
Free and unmeasured the gifts that they bring
Wounding to heal, concealing to reveal
Drying my tears, calming my fears
The hands of a hero

Battle-scarred and calloused
His hands know suffering
My name is etched into his palms
With each glance, he’ll remember me

He heals my every hurt
He bears my deepest pain
He assures me constantly
That this trial is for my gain

Because his hands are holding me
Strong and merciful, they are...

Chorus (2x)

The hands of a warrior, the hands of a king
Free and unmeasured the gifts that they bring
Wounding to heal, concealing to reveal
Drying my tears, calming my fears
The hands of a hero
Oh, the hands of a hero
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Post by Clareesa on Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:42 am

I like it! Very Happy
it's really cool!

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Post by Sonia J. on Thu Apr 16, 2009 11:00 am

that's really cool! great job! Very Happy
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Post by Foster G on Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:25 pm

yeah cool!
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Post by Abigail G. on Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:24 pm

That is a really neat song!

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Post by Guest on Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:12 pm

I wish I could hear the tune.lol but great job!
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Post by Foster G on Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:01 pm

is there a way we can listen to it?
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Post by Guest on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:13 pm

Thanks, guys! Very Happy

Foster, I'll see if we can get a "first draft" recording up on here. Today didn't work out for the band practice so I still haven't heard the song...but I'll see what we can do.
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Post by Guest on Sat Apr 18, 2009 7:26 pm

Thanks!
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Post by Mason R. on Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:44 pm

what's your band's name? cool song btw!

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Post by Kaitlan P. on Sun Apr 19, 2009 12:39 am

wow!! That's so beautiful!
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Post by Guest on Mon May 04, 2009 1:34 am

You guys are so nice. Very Happy

I heard the song! Yeah! I love it, love it...now about getting a rough recording up on here. Wink That could take a while...but it should happen.

Mason: Our band name is "House of Representatives", and you haven't heard of us because we're still a garage band. Kind of. Razz
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Post by Anna P on Mon May 04, 2009 11:23 am

Your song looks really good, I love the lyrics, can't wait to hear the recording, even if its rough. Smile
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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Tue May 05, 2009 6:04 pm

Yes I love the lyrics! I sooo want to hear the music with it!!!

Awesome job! I dont have the gift of song writing but have the gift of being ablt to enjoy others songs!
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