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Post by Clareesa on Thu Nov 20, 2008 5:50 pm

This is a song I just wrote...
Tell me what you think! And I am totally open to ideas on how to make it better!
And I know it's kinda long...but I always write long songs... Embarassed lol



God Help Me


Life can seem so hard,
days filled with sorrow and pain,
so what am I here for?
I feel I'm goin' insane.

Oh God help me!
I'm on my knees tongiht,
prayin' you'll see me through

Evertyhing around me,
seems so emp-ty
is there a reason for it all?
Can my life have pur-pose?

Oh God help me!
I'm on my knees tonight
cryin' out for you

I'm hopin' for a light,
a light to shine through,
all the darkness around me,
but that seems gone too.

Oh God help me!
I'm on my knees tonight
I need you today.

No sudden revalation,
There's no sudden change,
Life seems just the same,
where are you God?

Oh God help me!
I'm on my knees tonight,
Can you have me now?

I'm placin' my life in you,
I'm in your hands now,
I trust you
so help me God.

Oh God help me!
I'm cryin' out tonight
I'm gonna love you now.

THere's a reason now,
a reason for life,
it's so clear to me,
I'm trustin' in God

Oh God help me!
I wanna see you're face,
I'm living for you now.

So cry out to him!
He's listin' to you,
he puts the hope in you

Oh God thank you!
I'm on my knees tonight,
thankin' you for life,

So cry out to him!
He's listin' to you,
he puts the hope in you.

Oh God thank you!
I'm on my knees tongith,
thankin' you for life.

Oh God thank you
Oh GOd thank you
Thank you G-o-d

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Post by Guest on Thu Nov 20, 2008 6:32 pm

I love it! (And long songs are awesome... Very Happy )
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Post by Amy I. on Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:03 pm

That's so cool!
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Post by Sonia J. on Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:28 pm

I heard you singing that today! its a really great song! sparkles
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Post by Clareesa on Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:29 pm

Sonia J. wrote:I heard you singing that today! its a really great song! sparkles

No one was supposed to hear... Embarassed

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Post by Sonia J. on Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:30 pm

well I did! haha! lol! Squiggle
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Post by Guest on Fri Nov 21, 2008 12:40 am

haha i guess thats what you get for living in the same house Razz
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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Fri Nov 21, 2008 1:02 am

Too funny! And I like long songs!
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Post by Guest on Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:57 am

That is long! haha.
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Post by Sonia J. on Fri Nov 21, 2008 11:39 am

Jordan R wrote:haha i guess thats what you get for living in the same house Razz


ya Clareesa! lol!
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