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Post by Guest on Tue Nov 18, 2008 3:25 am

Here's my newest song...it's a half-hearted song about being let down by a friend or boyfriend/girlfriend type relationship. It's not completely finished, still gotta finish the bridge, but it looks as if we'll be playing it Saturday (yet I wrote it last night ha).

Verse 1:
Tokyo planes, gas and secret code names
I never told you I'm not good at playing games
Did you believe, I could be so naive
But, the highlight comes in the last scene

Pre-chorus:
I'm knocking down the door, to my heart

Chorus:
Loving you, is the hardest thing
I knew from the start, this can't be happening
Loving you, is the hardest thing
I knew from the start, this tore our worlds apart

Verse 2:
Now I'm burning down every pitiful street
Like when we were kids hiding with the war paint
And the memories are haunting, just like the movies
But the highlight comes in the last scene

Bridge:
Because in the last scene the angels will raise voices
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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Tue Nov 18, 2008 10:53 am

That is really good! probly one of your best so far!(in least that you have posted)
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Post by Guest on Tue Nov 18, 2008 11:30 am

Interesting
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Post by Clareesa on Tue Nov 18, 2008 12:51 pm

Cool!

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Post by Guest on Tue Nov 18, 2008 3:21 pm

nice job dude! where'd you get the inspiration? hahha
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Post by Guest on Tue Nov 18, 2008 4:13 pm

That's not a very nice thing to say... Wink

I really like the song, Jeremy! I would probably be crying if I could hear it with music, especially strings... Very Happy
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Post by Sonia J. on Tue Nov 18, 2008 4:16 pm

cool!
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Post by Guest on Wed Nov 19, 2008 2:58 am

Megan Langham wrote:That's not a very nice thing to say... Wink

I really like the song, Jeremy! I would probably be crying if I could hear it with music, especially strings... Very Happy
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Post by Guest on Wed Nov 19, 2008 12:59 pm

Jeremy why did you quote her?
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Post by Guest on Wed Nov 19, 2008 1:19 pm

Ha...my browser must've messed up...I was saying it's funny to me cuz John knows who it's about...and it's about a girl. lol
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Post by Guest on Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:55 am

yeah i wasnt saying i thought it was bad.... i really like it... i just thought id say something only 1 person would understand just to be a nut clown
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Post by Crystal Rose C. on Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:14 am

I think I get the point! Wink Ohh and John Where did you get that pic? I saw that same sign in LA once. Gess it is a well known one just like the "why lie I need bear" one!
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Post by Guest on Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:38 pm

i took it.
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Post by Guest on Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:51 pm

jk, that s a lie, i copy pasted it off of Ethanluck.com. He took the picture in Cincanatti. The irony just cracked me up because he can't actually kick you.
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Post by Guest on Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:28 pm

I one time saw two bums on the side of the street with a sign saying, "Hungry Hungry Hobbos!"
AHAHHA! me and my friend were cracking up!

anyways, nice work Jeremyyy!
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Post by Guest on Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:30 pm

Haha that's awesome!!!

Thanks. =]
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