Grace & Forgiveness

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Grace & Forgiveness

Post by Jeremy K. on Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:53 am

Here's a newly finishd track...it's one of four my band will be playing very soon!

VERSE 1:
Do you see the mess I’ve made
I’m a wreck, I’m a shame
To feel Love’s embrace
It gives me guilt, it gives me strength

PRE-CHORUS:
I feel like a fake, I’m just a phony
I see your pain, that gave me mercy

CHORUS:
Can you feel grace and forgiveness
God’s love for you and me
Can you see God’s perfect possession
His blood for you and me

VERSE 2:
Do you see the man I betrayed
I’m selfish, I’m afraid
To see love embrace
All my guilt, all my shame

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Re: Grace & Forgiveness

Post by Crystal C. on Fri Aug 15, 2008 8:08 am

So good!
"It is not how much we have, but how much we enjoy, that makes happiness."
Charles Haddon Spurgeon



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Re: Grace & Forgiveness

Post by Clareesa J. on Fri Aug 15, 2008 8:57 am

Really, all the songs you post are amazing! Very Happy
"After Extrusive Contemplation, I Have Made An Unequivocal Resolution To
Expand My Vernacular"

Proverbs 17:17: A friend loves at all times,
and a brother is born for adversity.

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Re: Grace & Forgiveness

Post by Sara D. on Sat Aug 16, 2008 3:10 am

WOW you have a real talent!!
Sara D.

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