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The Greater One

Post by Clareesa J. on Thu Jul 10, 2008 5:48 am

This is a poem I wrote about a year (maybe two) ago. I don't usually like to write poems, but I thought of this one in my head and decided to write it out. Tell me what you thnk. Very Happy





Like a whisper through the wind,
Like a piercing through the night,
A sound came from the darkness,
To anyone who heard, it gave fright.

It slunk along the shadows,
It went through open windows,
Attacking its unaware victim,
Their screams heard across the town.

An open window,
Inside a young boy,
Sleeping soundly,
His heart filled with joy.

Knowing in his heart,
A joy greater than darkness,
A guardian to protect him,
To keep him from all evil.

From the open window came the darkness,
It’s evil laugh echoing through the air,
It saw the sleeping boy,
And harm him he not dare.

For even the darkness knew,
There was a greater power,
One that could destroy even him,
Even that very hour.

The darkness slunk away,
Fearing the greater one,
The one who protects,
The one who is the only one.

Now all who trust in the One,
Fear the darkness no more,
For the greater One,
Is in their hearts forever more.

For God is the One,
the only One,
who came from heaven to earth,
to die for all we have done.

Because he loves you
and always will.


Last edited by Clareesa J. on Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:40 pm; edited 1 time in total
"After Extrusive Contemplation, I Have Made An Unequivocal Resolution To
Expand My Vernacular"

Proverbs 17:17: A friend loves at all times,
and a brother is born for adversity.

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Re: The Greater One

Post by Anna P on Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:00 pm

I like your peom alot.
Thanks for sharing it with us, I think you did an awesome job.

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Re: The Greater One

Post by Crystal C. on Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:52 am

I like it to! I'm not that great of a wrighter. But I love reading others poems, songs and storys!

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Re: The Greater One

Post by @ubrey B. on Wed Jul 16, 2008 3:14 am

I read this before at your house...i think, but i remember liking it alot.
And wishing i could write like that. alien
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Re: The Greater One

Post by Amy I. on Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:07 am

You most certainly DO write!

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Re: The Greater One

Post by Jesse.dev on Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:09 am

its got a great message

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Re: The Greater One

Post by Mason R. on Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:29 am

very cool!

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Re: The Greater One

Post by Charity C. on Sat Jul 26, 2008 2:14 am

love it! Exclamation

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Re: The Greater One

Post by Joshua P on Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:17 am

Great Jobe!!!SmileyCentral.com

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Re: The Greater One

Post by Sarah on Sun Jul 27, 2008 11:23 am

HoooRa!

i'm bad at poetry because i always think of the dumbests thingss to ryme with....
"Posh, name a shrub after me. Something prickly and hard to irradicate."
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Re: The Greater One

Post by RachaelB on Thu Jul 31, 2008 6:30 am

HEY!
Thats AWESOME!! You did a really coolioz job!
Maybe you should think about writing more. =D

Well ttyl8er
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Re: The Greater One

Post by Clareesa J. on Thu Jul 31, 2008 7:00 am

thanx! Smile But really, I don't write poems a lot...mostly books....
just once inawhile I come up with an idea in my head! Very Happy
"After Extrusive Contemplation, I Have Made An Unequivocal Resolution To
Expand My Vernacular"

Proverbs 17:17: A friend loves at all times,
and a brother is born for adversity.

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Re: The Greater One

Post by RachaelB on Thu Jul 31, 2008 7:10 am

Yah. Well thats okay. The acational ones sometimes tend to be better.

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Re: The Greater One

Post by Clareesa J. on Thu Jul 31, 2008 7:31 am

yup! Laughing
"After Extrusive Contemplation, I Have Made An Unequivocal Resolution To
Expand My Vernacular"

Proverbs 17:17: A friend loves at all times,
and a brother is born for adversity.

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